Написала еще один короткий рассказ о лошадях

Рассказ называется «Алмаз-слонопотам».
Ссылка: https://silentpolyglot.com/алмаз-слонопотам/
Прошу, не судите слишком строго. Понимаю, что в рассказе много косяков, но, к сожалению, мне пока не хватает опыта и чутья, чтобы самой их выловить и исправить.
Буду признательна за любые подсказки и советы как улучшить текст. Спасибо! ❤️

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